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Thursday, 25 August 2016
EPS Olympics Acrostic Poem
Reflection: We have been learning about the Olympics.
I learned more about the Olympics.
I found this tricky because It was not just one word. My next step is to put more onomatopoeia in my work.
I enjoyed reading your poem. You have used a few onomatopoeia words in your poem but the success criteria was to use them in every line. Next time try to use more detail and write sentences rather than just a few words per line.
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I enjoyed reading your poem. You have used a few onomatopoeia words in your poem but the success criteria was to use them in every line. Next time try to use more detail and write sentences rather than just a few words per line.
Ok thanks mrs melvile u are the best
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